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Crystal Cunningham MD's avatar

Yeah, I'm just getting back from burning a hole in my brain for two weeks. Which is making a bigger hole than was there before, that someone put there. It's hard to win these days but onward we go...until we don't anymore.

Rafa Joseph's avatar

Hi Crystal! I remember you well, from the comment section of the other version of this. I have different poems too, you know? 😉

Where did you actually go for those two weeks, if you don't mind my asking?

Crystal Cunningham MD's avatar

In my head, I went in unarmed. I came out a little worse for the wear. It’ll be a while before I go back.

Rafa Joseph's avatar

Where did you go to, unarmed?

Alicia's avatar

This would make a great song.

Rafa Joseph's avatar

So many of my poems are actually intended to be songs! (though I haven’t properly notated the intended melodies yet)

You chose one of the few that I never considered making into a song, even for a moment. 😂

Alicia's avatar

Ha! That figures.

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Rafa Joseph's avatar

I love writing songs. We should talk about it some more. I'm great at lyrics & vocal melody, but have a hard time getting the remainder of the notes down.

If you feel like finishing one or two of mine, we could have some hits on our hands!

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Well done , rafa!

Rafa Joseph's avatar

Thank you, Ray!

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

That was great

Rafa Joseph's avatar

So happy this resonated! ☺️