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There’s a delirious energy to this, and a clear mastery of homophones. Lines like “Let appear all our enemies; we’ll meet them there” carry real authority. At times the word choice feels led more by rhyme than by pressure, and I found myself missing a single anchoring image or claim as a centre of gravity. That said, that may be the point, and I may be a traditionalist.

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